Face Wrinkle Names
Wednesday, June 16th, 2010 at
10:06 am
[TEMPLATE]Merchants Review[/TEMPLATE]
Tagged with: face wrinkle names
Filed under: Wrinkles
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You keep posting the same questions and yet you refuse to take our advice… Why do you keep asking?
Your work is still juvenile, immature, and amateurish. This has NOTHING to do with your age – it's just not that good.
And asking us to take it easy on you because you're 16 is ridiculous. How will you ever learn?
The story line is boring and your characters are flat. You need a ton of editing. If you are SERIOUS about your writing, you need to do a LOT of work.